The Story Behind the Story: “Void”

Years ago, I lived in a big apartment complex in South Korea that had its own ATM machine. It was an old machine, and for whatever reason, it tended to be very temperamental—sometimes it’d be out of bills, sometimes it’d be unusually slow, and sometimes it just wouldn’t work at all. Oddly, it was almost humanlike in how it would have good days and bad days. Occasionally I’d find myself getting frustrated by its fickleness and defects, but I’d quickly realize how futile—an amusing—it was to be so aggravated by an inanimate thing.

Couple those ATM annoyances—minor as they might have been—with another issue that I think most people have dealt with at some point: the frustration of having to deal with an electronic voice or recording—often in a customer service situation—instead of conversing with a real person. I think there’s this pervasive line of thinking that computer programs offer a more streamlined experience for a frustrated customer and ultimately expedite any given transaction. But what will happen as computers become more personable? How might the automated customer service sector be impacted by computers that have personalities (…think of Siri’s snarkiness being only the beginning)?

            Somewhere in between all that, the idea for this story emerged. It started with a vague idea of what I wanted to write about—a man (the narrator) conversing with an ATM. Those were to be the main characters. And that seemed simple enough for a premise, but then questions arose about the topic of the characters’ conversation and the tone of their discussion and how it would all ultimately be resolved.

I knew that I had to insert conflict somewhere near the beginning to set the whole story in motion. I came up with the idea of the narrator divulging his secret desire to have an affair with the neighbor because an affair was so blatantly an act that only a human could do; the ATM could only relate to such a situation factually and logically rather than emotionally. So, all this instantly put a fjord between the narrator and the ATM. Once that separation was established, it naturally created conflict and it was just fun to fill in the dialogue—one character speaking with such emotion and the other being overly logical.

I quickly realized that writing the narrator’s ongoing argument with the ATM felt much like writing an argument between a couple—say, a husband and wife, or a boyfriend and girlfriend. And since the story is founded on a theme of potential infidelity, I liked that. That’s when the story really started coming to life for me, amid that realization.

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